Showing posts with label friends. Show all posts
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Saturday, October 22, 2011

St-Hair-io-Typing

A friend-of-a-friend has been so uncool as to join facebook but not post a photo of his face! I have never met this friend-of-a-friend, but I hear about him so much that I find myself trying to construct his appearance through snippets of information. I can do ok, I think, in a generic, police-sketch, could-be-anybody-sorta kind of way.

I find now, likely due to the fact that men are almost constantly in hats (ball caps are awful, men, please stop) these days, I have trouble picturing realistic male haircuts in my mind. I can write them okay, since they come from my imagination, but I have difficulty guessing what haircuts which guy will have.

Instead, if someone gives me a general description of a guy, I simply supply a "type" hairdo, and that is what he's stuck with. I have even pin-pointed the general trends, plotting where film and TV have supplied data not offered by my eyes, based on other descriptors I have been given about the guy. Some examples:

1. "Blond" - He has the Luke Skywalker in my head.


2. "Dark haired" - He is suddenly sporting the Erik Estrada.


3. "Republican" - Nothing short of the Johnny Unitas will do.


4. "Democrat" - He gets his hair done at the same place as George Harrison.


5. "Trendy boy" - He is inevitably some variation on Meg Ryan.


6. "Square" - He is Stephen Harper.



This is not right. Will I have to go to cosmetology school just to solve this issue, or shall I just grow accustomed to, and accept, these Starsky and Hutch wigs of my imagination born from the crassest of profiling?

Or maybe I just need more sleep...

Monday, July 11, 2011

Betareaders are the Alpha and Omega of Publishing


I wonder if the Big Writers still use betareaders? You know, I bet they do, even if it's their husband, or aunt Tilly, or another writer buddy. But, one thing for sure, when you are an indie and/or impoverished writer, betareaders are not only your best friend - they are essential to your livelihood in publishing.

So, what is a betareader? Even if you have never heard of a betareader, or possibly a "test reader" or "test audience," dollars to donuts you've benefited from one if you have ever read a book.

A betareader is one of the first people a writer gets to read their draft, after they are semi-okay with it themselves. These test readers have a tough job, because it's not just reading - it's critiquing, giving feedback, answering/asking questions about the work, finding plot holes, exposing bad writing, pointing out flaws, and occasionally giving emergency mental health counseling to authors at the point of jumping out windows trying to weed these issues out. It's a big job, and one that is very rarely compensated enough.

Some betareaders are just voracious readers. Some are writers, within and without the same genre as the book. Some are editors or proofers for their day job (though that is a different stage than betareading). Some are pros, and most are volunteers.

The important thing is that they represent the readers who will eventually (one hopes) plunk down hard earned cash for the book that the writer ultimately produces.

Thus, betareaders do three major tasks: (1) They help the writer produce a much, much, much better draft for submission (which, obviously, makes for a better book altogether). (2) Their feedback helps the writer become a better writer over time, by helping them identify weak spots when writing the next one and hone editing/revision skills. (3) They help protect future readers from frustrations - inadvertently paying for a book with errors, confusing motivations, plot inconsistencies, inaccuracies, obnoxious writing habits, etc.

If you let your betareaders be free and frank with you, and you listen to them well, they tell you if what you have produced is worth the confidence a reader places in you when they exchange their money for your book. Or, they will help you find a way to get the book into that exalted state.

In essence, with the much-toted decline of "traditional publishers" and the rise of "indie authors" (which is not a subject I will touch here with a ten foot pole), betareaders are an increasingly crucial part of the restructured "gate keepers" of literature. Certainly, those of us (still?) publishing with actual companies will have editors and line readers, and any indie author dedicated to producing quality work will hire an independent editor/proofer, but these people do not replace the betareader.

The betareaders, the acquisition editors, the substance editor(s), the line readers and the proofers all do separate, though essential, work, just as none of them can replace the writer's own editing phases and vice versa. Besides, without honest and alert betareaders, chances are the book won't ever make it past the acquisitions editors to the contract/editing/proofing phases, anyway.

On top of this, betareaders are usually a different thing from critters, as well - "critters" (AKA "critique circles") being your fellow writers who only read/hear bits and pieces as you write for critique purposes, in exchange for critiques of their own work. This is also a valuable asset, but no replacement for a total betareading experience, though your betareading pool can include some critters. Is this making any sense?

So, to break this down - the writer produces a draft (or drafts of chapters, though I usually wait until the whole thing at once), and edits, sometimes with the help of critters along the way. When he or she simply can't look at it any more, it goes off to the betareaders. They (I try to go for three) read it. Their focus will depend on their interests and personalities - some will look at the writing mechanics more than the plot, while others like to think about the characters or the bigger picture. It's great to have a mixture of all these. When they are finished reading it, they will send you their Notes, and, if you are lucky, will let you pelt them with questions about the book. The writer will then crawl back to their revisions cave and try to fix the flaws picked out like magic by the intrepid betareaders. Then, depending on how severe the problems were, the book might be sent back to betareading again - either with the same readers or fresh ones. Then the writer does those revisions, and then usually will do another editing phase him/herself, and maybe set it aside for a bit, and do another one. Then the book goes through acquisition editing, which (with luck) results in a contract offer. Then it goes through substantive editing, line editing, and proofing, resulting in many more revision rounds. Then, if the writer is anal, they might get one more betareading in on the galley before they sign off, just to catch anything floating around in the book, and do one more read through themselves.

And, voila! Then you have a book ready for the market - and the resulting customer and professional reviewers. But, by the time you get their feedback it is often too late. The problems they find can certainly help for your next book, but you had better make sure you had solid betareaders and editors to make it as good as possible before it reaches the live audience.

Who are my betareaders? I have some very lovely volunteers. For the new book, I have Beth, a writer and reader; Amanda, an artist and essayist; and Trishy, a reader and grammar hound. They do wonderful work, and I appreciate them so very much. It's best to have a pool of betareaders so as to not exhaust the good will of your favourites (I am always taking "applications," by the way), but when you find a solid betareader, they are worth their weight in gold.

This is my ode to the betareaders. If you are an author, you likely already knew how valuable they are. If you are a reader, or not yet published, I hope you take a moment while enjoying a good book to offer a little silent thanks to these folks. They are a foundational part of making every novel its best, and a line of defense against bad writing.


Hats off to the betareaders!

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

An Interview with a NaNo Veteran


On the last day of NaNo, I wanted to sit down with a very good friend of mine - so good, she was the only one who took pity on me and gave me a NaNo-related interview! I have known Jaime, AKA b4e, for nearly a year now, and she was a bit part of me re-entering the world of fiction. So, I owe her for more than just the interview, that's for sure.

Jaime is a fanfiction writer who focuses a good deal on the Bionic Woman (hence her nickname). I admire fanfiction writers enormously, because they provide ongoing stories for fans, but often without the hope of monetary reward due to copyright issues. It takes a good deal of dedication to provide so much labour just for the love of a subject!

Before Jaime got me interested in it, I was not sure I wanted to do NaNo - because of her, I now have a NaNo under my belt - and Jaime now has three! Congrats, Jaime!

When did you do NaNoWriMo? How many times?

In 2007 and again in 2009.

Did you make it?

I finished by the skin of my teeth in '07, but in '09 I went about 10,000 words over. (Both stories were a bit shorter after they were edited, but the '09 story was still above 55,000 words.)

How did that feel?

The first year I felt extremely relieved that it was finally over. Last year, I would've liked to have kept going for another few weeks; I was having so much fun!

What was your NaNoWriMo novel about?

Both stories were Bionic Woman/Six Million Dollar Man fanfiction. The first one involved an earthquake and the second story was called 'Legacy'. The Bionic Woman looked back upon her life as she faced her impending death. (It wasn't as morbid as it sounds!)

What has become of the 50k? Did you publish it?

Both stories are posted online, but due to the unavailability of publishing rights, they remain unpublished. They received good reviews from the readers, though; especially 'Legacy'.

How was the NaNoWriMo experience, over all?

The first one was grueling because I started out with a totally different story and changed topics – started completely from scratch – on Day 7 or 8.

What on earth possessed you to do it?

I'm not sure. Insanity?

What did you learn from the experience?

That writing is not a chore if you enjoy your subject and just let it flow.

How did you find the quality of writing?

The first one – where I had to grit my teeth and really force myself to keep going – was....okay. I think that the second one was some of the best writing I've ever done. I'm very proud of 'Legacy'.

Would/will you do it again?

Absolutely! I hope to participate again this year, if my health allows it. Otherwise, I will definitely be back in the future!
You can read Legacy, by Jaime (aka bionic4ever, aka b4e) at her fanfiction site, where she has over 140 stories! Jaime also writes posts for various true crime blogs, and has a passion for unidentified and missing persons cold cases. And she's truly one in a million.

Thanks, Jaime. :blowkiss:

Saturday, October 30, 2010

Cover Art Excitement!


Wild Horse has okayed the use of this beautiful painting done for me by my good friend, artist Amanda Wood. The titles and such will be added later, but I wanted to share the painting as it is - I think it is absolutely lovely, and I am grateful to Amanda and to WHP.

I wanted bison, snow and the northern lights to be the focal point of my cover, even though a pair of lovers is, perhaps, more common for romance novels. To me, the lone buffalo in the cold represents the willfulness of people who resist change and love, a major theme of my story, while the northern lights represent hope and passion - and fire in the coldest reaches.

Further, buffalo and the lights play a significant role in the book, and symbolize the distant exoticness to be found right here in Canada - a reminder that there are still wild, beautiful places, even in places we know well.

I am so excited that this will be my cover, and I can't wait to see it up for sale. And I look forward to hearing reader response to this, my first full length novel accepted and released.

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Lovely Blog Awards






Last week, I received a "Lovely Blog Award" from fellow author and blogger Ashlynn Monroe, which really made my day. It's not a jury award, etc - it just means that the gifter has recently discovered your blog and thinks it's really great/pretty/useful.

This is how the award works:
Accept the award, post it on your blog together with the name of the person who has granted the award and his or her blog link.

Pass the award to 15 other blogs that you’ve newly discovered.
Remember to contact the bloggers to let them know they have been chosen for this award.


So, I hand it to the following dynamite blogs:

http://thelyricalwoodshed.blogspot.com/
http://jmsmithromanceauthor.blogspot.com/
http://jaimeygrant.blogspot.com/
http://www.shadowsofromance.blogspot.com/
http://quackersandtease.blogspot.com/
http://joannetroppello.weebly.com/blog.html
http://notesfromnadir.blogspot.com/
http://felicityheaton.blogspot.com/
http://www.claredargin.bravejournal.com/
Author Jaime DeBree (she has a lot of them!)

... plus 5 personal blogs belonging to friends! (I will contact these folks separately.)

CONGRATS!

Go check them out!

Please, do not feel obligated to post this, or to pass it on, if you don't wish - but please accept my congratulations for a blog well blogged!

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