Just wanted to share this new review from this month's issue of JERR, page 21:
Good for the Goose is a short story coming in at just 35 pages, but reads like a full sized book. The character development for such a short is extremely well done. I completely got to know Natasha and felt much of what she felt. Ms. Holly has done a great job in telling Natasha’s story and how she transends her despair and grabs at love when she gets the chance. Raphael is a HOT little piece of tail that struts his stuff for Natasha, making him hard for her to resist. The sex in this story was sizzling HOT and fairly well written. The love scenes did seem a little bit stiff, during the actual sex the passion seemed lacking, but still all in all I enjoyed this short story by Ms. Holly and will definitely look for more books from this author. I recommend Good for the Goose for anyone looking for a quick HOT read.Four stars - not too shabby!
And I like that they gave me good feedback on a weakspot, so I can work on it. They still liked it, though, so that's a WIN, I think!
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So glad! Well done. Creative crit is always welcome, too. :D
Thanks, Jasmine. It's a good review, and I do like it when reviews give me some hints on improving.
This one was originally written back in November 2010, so I think I've done a lot better since then. It was my first erotic-romance, but I've learned a lot more about writing love scenes since. The ones in Like Magic and Bubbly, for example - I wouldn't call those stiff at all. It's nice to see development.
Still, they did say the love scenes in Good for the Goose were hot and well-written, so they couldn't have been too bad. :)
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